Ch 6

Discourse Grammar

Given/new · end-weight · end-focus · cohesion

Grammar in service of discourse

At C2 you arrange grammar to serve information flow — given before new, end-weight, theme-rheme structure. This is what makes academic writing feel natural.

Given before new
Old information at the start; new info at the end.
Theme/rheme
Theme = topic (what we're talking about) / Rheme = comment (what we say about it)
End-weight
Longer / heavier elements at the end of the sentence for balance.
End-focus
New / important info naturally falls at the end of the sentence.

Information flow — given before new

Awkward (new before given)
An expert in renewable energy from Berlin arrived. The conference begins tomorrow.
Natural (given before new)
The conference begins tomorrow. It will host an expert in renewable energy from Berlin.
"It" picks up "the conference" (given) before introducing the expert (new). This is how cohesion happens — the topic flows from sentence to sentence.

End-weight principle

Avoid heavy subjects
That she had won the lottery was a shock.
Use it-extraposition
It was a shock that she had won the lottery.
Avoid heavy front
To understand the implications of these complex findings takes time.
Use it-extraposition
It takes time to understand the implications of these complex findings.
Move longer object to end
We gave the report we had been working on for months to the manager.
Better
✓ We gave the manager the report we had been working on for months.

End-focus — putting key info last

Active vs passive choice
Marie Curie won the Nobel Prize. → The Nobel Prize was won by Marie Curie.
Cleft for emphasis
It was Marie Curie who won the Nobel Prize.
Pseudo-cleft
What she wanted most was recognition.
Fronting / topicalization
This particular issue, we will examine next.
Choose your sentence structure based on which element should receive the most attention. The reader's eye naturally weights what's at the end.

Cohesion devices: reference, substitution, ellipsis

Reference (pronouns)
The PM resigned. She made the decision quickly.
Demonstrative reference
Sales rose sharply. This surprised analysts.
Summary noun reference
Prices rose then fell. This pattern repeated all year.
Substitution
I have a red car and a blue one.
Ellipsis
She has finished, but I haven't [finished].
Lexical chains
the crisis → the situation → the problem → the issue (synonyms maintain topic)

Common mistakes

A long-awaited and controversial report was released yesterday.
Yesterday saw the release of a long-awaited and controversial report.
heavy subject — use end-weight
That she had won was surprising to everyone in the room.
It was surprising to everyone in the room that she had won.
it-extraposition for heavy "that" clause
Marie Curie won. She was the first woman to win it.
Marie Curie won. She was also the first woman to do so.
avoid pronoun ambiguity / use lexical chain

Recap

Given → new
old info first · new info last
topic flow between sentences
End-weight
heavy elements at the end
it-extraposition for long clauses
End-focus
most important info at the end
active/passive/cleft choices
Cohesion
reference · substitution · ellipsis · lexical chains
this pattern, one, [omitted], synonyms
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